tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post7752113246496068818..comments2023-10-15T07:36:05.092-07:00Comments on A Piece Of Mind: Are You Listening? (BTP)Cynthia Shorthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-9382340804584561832010-09-17T19:05:49.338-07:002010-09-17T19:05:49.338-07:00I love how you described him/her as "reptilia...I love how you described him/her as "reptilian" and insect-like. The imagery really added an extra punch to this strong poem.Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-11753152089622227282010-09-14T03:02:08.416-07:002010-09-14T03:02:08.416-07:00I've been there, and this is a powerful remind...I've been there, and this is a powerful reminder.EKSwitajhttp://www.elizabethkateswitaj.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-57828786649168286232010-09-12T15:20:32.265-07:002010-09-12T15:20:32.265-07:00No doubt your valedictory words were as much in th...No doubt your valedictory words were as much in the service of your own self-respect as they were for the comprehension of the guilty party so I'm sure they weren't wasted. And 'goodbye' must have been the last one of them so you did get it in!Dickhttp://patteran.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-48699559207007487642010-09-12T15:18:05.567-07:002010-09-12T15:18:05.567-07:00I thought this is intriguing and I wonder did you ...I thought this is intriguing and I wonder did you use the photo as inspiration? I think all of us have been this angered with a person and hurt built up inside us. If this piece was wasted on them then you did not waste it here, because you have peers that appreciate good work even tho it was intended to "enlighten someone" else.Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-91549239347092068752010-09-11T11:16:22.163-07:002010-09-11T11:16:22.163-07:00You capture that moment of clarity and self-preser...You capture that moment of clarity and self-preservation so well.Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-6016539575102532492010-09-11T08:13:54.868-07:002010-09-11T08:13:54.868-07:00"slapping realization" ... loved the kin..."slapping realization" ... loved the kinetic urge in "slapping" and how it supports the whole poem.Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-9737841616373028932010-09-11T03:49:57.578-07:002010-09-11T03:49:57.578-07:00A difficult experience but at least you got a poem...A difficult experience but at least you got a poem out of it.<br /><br />Had to laugh - the captcha word was 'partin'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-54285523109001788992010-09-10T18:50:21.323-07:002010-09-10T18:50:21.323-07:00But how do you really feel? Ha ha -- loved this. V...But how do you really feel? Ha ha -- loved this. Very cathartic to get that anger out. Great imagery!nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-87509663599955702712010-09-10T18:47:16.465-07:002010-09-10T18:47:16.465-07:00Amen. Yes. What a strong poem.Amen. Yes. What a strong poem.Lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-8175825131413996412010-09-10T17:52:36.466-07:002010-09-10T17:52:36.466-07:00A snake??? Hisssss! I agree, GOOD BYE is definit...A snake??? Hisssss! I agree, GOOD BYE is definitely good enough. You don't want to be angry and quoted, LOL. Indeed, a strong poem!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-39533141961553002502010-09-10T15:21:10.701-07:002010-09-10T15:21:10.701-07:00I hear you, Cynthia. Sometimes just the word GOOD...I hear you, Cynthia. Sometimes just the word GOOD-BYE is enough. Other words are wasted....Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-82475050337530023472010-09-10T14:16:53.525-07:002010-09-10T14:16:53.525-07:00Exactly. Well said. I heard every word. :)Exactly. Well said. I heard every word. :)Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-24665586127282595222010-09-10T14:06:36.192-07:002010-09-10T14:06:36.192-07:00Cynthia I say do not hold anything back!
Excellent...Cynthia I say do not hold anything back!<br />Excellent!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-48549081487856685372010-09-10T13:03:43.574-07:002010-09-10T13:03:43.574-07:00Some crazy characters in this world, and it is rar...Some crazy characters in this world, and it is rare that the words of others breaks through the barriers of their ears. Wonderfully written work! =)<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-4396007206661273422010-09-10T12:49:42.022-07:002010-09-10T12:49:42.022-07:00I'm applauding. Cathartic is good.
Elizabeth...I'm applauding. Cathartic is good. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2010/09/10/in-one-word/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-90464001705362760092010-09-10T12:47:44.835-07:002010-09-10T12:47:44.835-07:00yes. yes. been there. done that. :)
great use of ...yes. yes. been there. done that. :)<br /><br />great use of metaphor to get it done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-37443375520315050202010-09-10T11:32:07.366-07:002010-09-10T11:32:07.366-07:00Terrific poem. Bravo for getting it off your ches...Terrific poem. Bravo for getting it off your chest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-33375910356639199282010-09-10T11:21:08.501-07:002010-09-10T11:21:08.501-07:00Wonderful words and imageWonderful words and imageJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-58479029889281572902010-09-10T07:00:41.364-07:002010-09-10T07:00:41.364-07:00I understand. As they say, I have been there, don...I understand. As they say, I have been there, done that, got the t-shirt.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2285017393769287433.post-56539380239383179402010-09-10T01:20:32.999-07:002010-09-10T01:20:32.999-07:00Don't hold back. Say what you really mean, Cyn...Don't hold back. Say what you really mean, Cynthia:) 'Insectile ears' would reduce any adversary to a heap.<br /><br /> LOL (maybe in sheer nervous terror)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.com